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Re: Survey
Wow, Nate, that many? 1.Total number of books you own? Hmm... the last un-official count, not even counting all of the cook books in the laundry room, or all the ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Darkness and Light
Oops, i was not going to comment because i didn't see any thing wrong with it, but then i saw that it was R rated... should it stop and not ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Discover The Sanctum
Umm... does anyone play this anymore, asides from my bro, Zera? i've started two characters, but they both got deleted because i wasn't active enough because i never got the ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Hmm... sweet! One thing, though, in "As they caress me" you might want to add a comma at the end. And maybe chck some other punctuation, but it's totally up ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: I want to
Hmm... it could use some more structure, and you need to capitalize a letter or two... Just kidding! XD Well, you could try to write an editorial or something to ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: When Brakes Are A Bad Thing
Hmm... nicely done! This is honestly the best essay i've read in a long time. One thing, though, in Time stopped. I can vividly recall the force of the impact, ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: What are you currently reading?
Hmm... i just finished The Extraordinary Adventures Of Alfred Kru(u?)p and Kimchi And Calamari. Sorta reading The Sword Of Shanara, whenever i can from my reading/language arts teacher's library, tryi
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Are you writing a novel right now?
Umm... Kinda... i'm thinking about it, the idea has been floating around in my head, but... You'll have to wait 'till i actually write any of it before you know ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: I'm a Prisoner
Dang, thought-provoking! You should just do what you like to do, and don't worry about all that other stuff! If you don't like to do it, then just don't do ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: The Note
Hmm... pretty good! Well, x0xGilmore Girliex0x pretty much nailed it, so that's about all there is. Except the italics: i get the feeling that they didn't quite come out right... ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Welcome me!
Hullo! And Welcome!, of course! Just two things: Please try to not use as much chat speak in everything as u usd here. It may tck som people off. :) ...
Sep 18, 2008 -
Re: New.
Dude! You made it on! Welcome!
Sep 18, 2008 -
Re: Who is that Man on the Cross?
Hmm... wow... This is amazing. i actually started to cry, which is really rare. Just two thing aside from what everyone else said: In "I politely nudge a man standing ...
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: It’s The End Say “Goodbye”
Hmm... wow... Normally stuff like this would just seem so cliched, but this is actually very good. You totally put me out of business in the bad grammar department. So ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Get A Free YWS Sticker! (updated with pictures)
Wow... i don't know why, but stickers are awesome! *puts an envelope inside of an envelope just like instructed* Thank you for going nuts, Nate!
Sep 7, 2008
